You are applying for a job in an international company. You would like to ask your previous employer to write a reference letter for you. Write a letter to your previous manager. In your letter
• remind your manager of the job you previously held in the company
• tell him / her what position you are applying for and why you want it
• ask him / her to provide you with a reference letter
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to request you a letter of reference, as I am applying for senior Hr executive in international organization called American express.
With regards to my profile, I am Urvashi Saxena one of the HR intern in your team and have worked with you from July 2019-July 2021. Besides, HR internship I was also trained on different operations parameters.
Please allow me to explain you the importance of this post. As, I am getting the opportunity to work as senior Hr executive with the esteemed company. Also, they are offering me good salary package. Not only the take home salary will be incredible but also I will get the chance to get pragmatic knowledge. This company will also provide medical benefits for parents.
As for my reference letter, I would like to request you to vouch for my character in the letter. More importantly, your reference towards my attitude and aptitude to learn will have a salutary effect on my application. Additionally, it would be great if you could mention few lines about my professional aspects.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours sincerely
Urvashi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01047120419 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89156952362 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2029770518 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6153846154 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273748786293 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919253296943 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851826822919 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142740690511 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709104461576 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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