You recently stayed in a hotel and left an item in the room Write a letter to the manager of the hotel In your letter describe the item that you left in the room explain where you think the item might be suggest how the manager can return the item to you

Essay topics:

You recently stayed in a hotel and left an item in the room. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:

• describe the item that you left in the room
• explain where you think the item might be
• suggest how the manager can return the item to you

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter to request you to return one of the item that I forgot to take it with me. My name is Urvashi saxena and I stayed in room no 318 on 22nd july-23rd July. Let me explain you the article.

It’s a brown colored folder containing important indenture. Also, it has a flip button on the upper side with a zipped pocket at the back side. On top of it, there is a small sticker pasted on right hand corner with my name written on it.

As far as I remember, I was having incredible time with one of my guest. Not only we were having enjoyment but also was discussing on few agreements lying in the file. There was a coffee table. So I must have left it over there.

I would be grateful, if you could return that predominant file on the address mentioned at the sticker pasted once you open the folder. Moreover, you will find some rupees in the pocket of the file, you can use the same money to courier the item to me. Besides, do not unfold any of the papers as it might disturb its serial order. Also, I am available on the number 8294336948.

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours sincerely
Urvashi

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30593607306 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28560593619 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8966386247 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26093113893 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708321057779 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875348379071 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133174382423 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113516386413 0.0580467560999 196% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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