In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
There is no doubt that crime happens more than before these days in all around the world. While there are many crimes in real world, novels and tv shows about that matter are getting more popular as well. In this essay, I will explore why these kinds of stories and books and tv shows are becoming more popular also, what is my idea about them.
When we talk about crime, we all know there are some risky, unexpecting and exciting situations. People read crime books and watch tv crimes dramas because they need some adrenalins and, they like to experience some new adventures which are unreachable for them in a real life. For instance, in a crime series, always there are lots of different actions that people enjoy watching them. In addition, when filming companies see how people like to watch crime tv shows, they invest more money to make them.
I believe, although you can have a great time with your friends to watch tv crimes drama and read some stories about them, these are some negative effects. In my consideration, some people have ability to imagine themselves in these kinds of situations and it may make them to a different person. Sometimes crime book story and tv crime shows demonstrate many ways to be a criminal person or how you can do bad things without remaining any clues.
To sum up, these days crime books and tv crime shows are more popular because people are more interested in them and, although I tend to agree with these kinds of books and shows are interesting and exciting, they have some negative effects as well.
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Suggestion: days'; day's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66909090909 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26789595575 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516363636364 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2251457272 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.727272727 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475697244461 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2013619149 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104687218023 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323566191355 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698279252685 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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