Children certainly are the future adult, the way we treat our children today will surely affect our country in the future. In particular, eating habits and lifestyle of the current generation is significantly different from what we have been through. This change is not positive and I am strongly concerned about it.
To begin with, eating habits of children in this generation has been worse than before. They are eating more processed or frozen food which has excessive amount of lipid, sugar, and sodium. None of those diets are healthy, and could increase health risk to our children in long term. In addition, fast food restaurants such as McDonalds or Burger King has been expanded more widely than before, as a result, many children are using those restaurant as their meeting point which drive more unhealthy food consumption.
Children’s lifestyle is also affected by popular culture these day. There are so many children who spend much of their time watching fun videos or playing games on a mobile phone or a tablet, they walk while looking at the tiny screen instead of being aware of their surroundings. Furthermore, they also spend time and money joining the activities that have no benefit to their development such as watching a concert or a movie. As a result, their muscles are less developed and they are easily exposed to diseases.
To sum up, children’s eating habits and lifestyle has been negatively impacted by the popular culture. Consequently, their development in both physical and brain are being dragged. I believe business should be more responsible for this in order to protect the future of the country and and own future profit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this restaurant' or 'those restaurants'?
Suggestion: this restaurant; those restaurants
...e, as a result, many children are using those restaurant as their meeting point which drive more...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...yle is also affected by popular culture these day. There are so many children who spend m...
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Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...er to protect the future of the country and and own future profit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, while, in addition, in particular, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06859205776 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7209728993 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1636771428 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242914869349 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800505347481 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514253901522 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141763974626 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399807346999 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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