In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, the demand for fast food is rapidly increased throughout the world. While this changing trend is often argued as a negative impact on families, individuals, or perhaps society, I agree with the point of view and will elaborate reasons in detail in this essay.
To begin with, it is well-known among many that excessive calories and highly contained fat and sugar in fast food are often playing more harm than good to individuals. Those who intake junk food frequently often have adult diseases, ranging from diabetes to obesity, which affects significant damage to our health for the long run. In addition, those mentioned diseases cause the loss of confidence and laziness, resulting in isolating themselves from their community. For example, a person who gains weight a lot by intaking pizza or hamburgers daily basis is likely to try not to expose their body shape in front of others and ended up having mental disorders like depression, which make their personal situation even worse.
Moreover, it is not hard to imagine that these side effects for individuals can break the relationship with family members. To cite an example to this, if fast food is a regular meal, there will be much less time to spend with a family at the dining table because they no longer need to grocery and cook with family. Furthermore, the rise in fast food eventually involves the disappearance of traditional food. In order words, there will be no more traditional food restaurants in the local society we used to enjoy in the past.
In conclusion, while it is evident that traditional foods are replaced by junk foods, this changing eating habit obviously plays a negative role in the aspect of an individual, family, and even society as mentioned above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, even so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97627118644 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6526457986 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2194985906 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.454545455 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294293054728 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107483251026 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726438899358 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173217729634 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718840723275 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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