In many countries, very few young people read newspaper or follow news on TV. What do you think are causes for this? What solutions can you suggest?
In many countries, very few young people read newspaper or follow news on TV. What do you think are causes for this? What solutions can you suggest?
Over the years, media has changed rapidly with development of technology. Earlier the only source of news was newspapers later came with radio, Television and social media. However, around the world there is increasing concern over decreasing popularity of reading newspapers and TV news channels popularity among young generation. I believe this was occurred mainly due to introduction of social media and below essay illustrate this issue in detail with reasons, impact and possible alternative actions to overcome the consequences.
At present format, most of the newspapers and news channels are not attractive for younger generation. The Language used in the newspapers are too difficult to understand and the style and content of the articles are not familiar or relevant to young age group. On the other hand, young generation conversant with latest technology of internet and smartphones, thus they have access to the social media news site at ease with much simplest language. Due to that reason, young generation interest with the traditional news channels and newspapers are diminishing as these are not attractive and outdated.
In order to increasing the popularity of watching TV news channels and newspapers should change their strategies to attract young generation. As an example, TV news channels should present on the internet sites, with less complex languages with face lift to attract young people. Apart from that, introduction of news programme or school based newspapers for school curriculums will provide positive impact and encouraging children to watch day to day news on regular basis. Furthermore, this will enhance the children’s knowledge about outside world.
In conclusion, many young people not interested to watch news channels due to traditional presentation method they used. In order to change this trend, these channels must change their strategies of presenting news format to attract young people. Further, introduction of school based news programmes or newspapers will have positive impact and encouragement among young children to watch the regular new programmes and newspapers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...other hand, young generation conversant with latest technology of internet and smartphones,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, apart from, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50284090909 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88887769672 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508522727273 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5549755766 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.611111111 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353275102104 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142699622474 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1660063757 0.0667982634062 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295949260973 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.352190264864 0.056905535591 619% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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