In the present scenario, the trend of migration to diverse nations is increasing day by day. It is considered by some that children get multifarious advantages by it, while there are others who think children face difficulties. I am of the opinion that moving to other places can bring an ample number of benefits.
On the one hand, moving overseas can play a tremendous role in children's life. Cross-culture is the greatest benefit which facilitates children to learn more about other cultures, traditions and customs. If they will interact with their peers and other society members having different religions and backgrounds, it will help to exchange ideas, thoughts and emotions. It is more likely that it would reduce linguistic barriers among them. It would not only helpful to enhance their personalities but also strengthens their bond. As a result, with the migration, people can create cordial relations with each other. To illustrate, graduates relocating to large developed countries get more benefits like free education based on last grades or marks, life insurance, medical claims and so on, which motivates them to be individualistic.
On the other hand, during shifting to other places sometimes children encounter serious repercussions in their life. After migrating, some psychological signs can be seen among young people which leads to stress, anxiety, confusion since lack of knowledge of native language, skills, degrees become a hurdle in their career. Thus, it may have detrimental impacts both on their mental as well as physical wellbeing. For example, a recent survey conducted by an eminent psychiatrist Richard Thomas at Oxford University revealed that over 40% of international individuals face problems like bullying, personal biasness while they move to other cities or places.
In my opinion, relocating to other countries provides countless benefits to all individuals regardless of their age and social status. Despite having all the basic ameneties in their home country, people tend to move to other places for promising careers, employment services, good lifestyle. Hence, migration is not only fruitful to youth but also for their guardians.
To conclude, although masses shift to diverse nations in terms of getting above mentioned benefits, they also want to stay connected with their roots.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44505494505 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86866337545 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1231869792 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.111111111 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245582691093 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734805072134 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633261576126 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130933732578 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07451295667 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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