Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people to visit these places?
National museums and historical sites are the valuable treasures of our society. It is unfortunate that local people do not visit these museums very often. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for lesser count of local visitors to such sites including busy lifestyle and lack of interest. Further I will suggest some solution to change this trend.
These days, it is quite common to see that visit to museums and historical monuments are enjoyed majorly by tourists and outsiders in contrast to localites. The primary reason for this thing is that local people are busy with their work and personal chores and they also believe that they are well-known to the history and details of their country and state therefore, they underestimate the significance of local heritage buildings and consider visiting local museums would be a waste of money and time. Another major reason is that nowadays, there are abundance of other attractive places where people love to go for example, water parks, carnivals, casinos and so on. Moreover, adults also want to visit the places where there kids enjoy and let them enjoy so, they do not find museums and other historic monuments as best place to visit in contrast to other lavishing amusement places where they can play, swim, dance and do any other recreation activity.
To accelerate the count of local visitors to the museums and ancient sites, the government should open and organize free tours to these buildings on national holidays so that local residents could visit them on any convenient day without taking leave from office. Another significant solution to this issue is to arrange exhibitions and contest for local children which would attract many to participate and win prizes. Thus, children would love to visit museums with friends and families , share their experiences with others and learn something new.
To conclude, It is undeniable that museums and historical sites have remained tourist attractions only. The major reasons for the lesser count of local visitors is their hectic lifestyle and lack of interest in museums and historic sites. I believe that there are various solutions to this situation such as free tours on national holidays and exhibitions and contest with prize distribution for local people could increase the count of local visitors greatly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... visit museums with friends and families , share their experiences with others and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16052631579 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51285436771 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494736842105 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.320677096 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.071428571 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388049839446 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141080559363 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642019437551 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247752776832 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264583018351 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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