Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think tha advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweight the disadvantages?
Nowadays, people do not go often to museums as they use to do thanks to technology, but it does not means that is less fantastic than before. There are some museums that demands money in order to let a person enter in its premise and others do not use this practice. This essay will discuss both disadvantages and advantages and show that, indeed, people should be charged to visit a museum.
First of all, some might argue that museums should be free of charge. This would allow the visit of many interested people and make it possible to less affordable ones to enter too and acquire knowledge or be educated as well. For example, tourists and an excursion of poor people could enter in those buildings and learn about ancient history. In addition, this policy create a non elitist place which will bring more visitors. People are more willing to go to a place who do not discriminate and include all kinds of persons.
However, I defend that museums should charge a fee in order to allow a person to enter and see statues and paitings. If nobody pays for this, who do you think will keep the museum open? Taxpayers and this is unacceptable. Because of taxes are being intended to museums, government will not be able to build schools or hospitals which are more necessary and attend the needs of the society. Moreover, if museums charges its visitors, they could hire more guides and cleaners to attract more persons. This happens with some well-known museums such as MOMA, in New York, and Louvre, in Paris. Thus, there should be a payment for people be allow to enter in museums.
Therefore, this essay discussed the ways in which museums should or not demands a fee for those who to wish to visit them. In my opinion, althought there are disadvantages associated with a charge policy, the advantages clearly outwights them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'go'.
Suggestion: often go
Nowadays, people do not go often to museums as they use to do thanks to ...
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Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ople do not go often to museums as they use to do thanks to technology, but it does...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...o thanks to technology, but it does not means that is less fantastic than before. The...
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Line 5, column 643, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'entering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: entering
...should be a payment for people be allow to enter in museums. Therefore, this essay di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72897196262 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46878789594 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529595015576 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.100768868 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2941176471 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281035338722 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923271585031 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634845889154 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183436064771 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445955218939 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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