There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Describe the complaints that have been made
Say why the reception are is important
Dear Mr. Brown
I am wirtingto inform you regarding a few comments about the waiting area for visitors and what we can do to make it a pleasant one for those who use it.
First oaf all, let me brief you the bad reviews about that area. A few clients thought the place was awful because lacks of maintance. For exameple, the furniture is old and have signs indicating that have been dirty. On top of that, they told me there is not much space to accomodate a significantly number of visitors, so they have to squeeze each other.
Despitethis notice there is a way to turn this problem around and make the visitors forget this issues. The reception is one of the most important rooms of a company because it is the first thing that you see when enter there. The visitor must feel welcomed by the staff and and see how confortable and beautiful is the reception. This can gives an amazing first impression about the place itself.
In order to visitors be delited for our company's entrace we must transform it and by that I mean change the old furniture for new ones, open up those walls and create more space and leave a table with a coffee machine on it, so everyone can use whenever they want.
Having said that, I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest about your likes and dislikes on this matter.
Your sincerely,
Will Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('number') instead of another adjective.
...e there is not much space to accomodate a significantly number of visitors, so they have to squeeze ea...
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...visitor must feel welcomed by the staff and and see how confortable and beautiful is th...
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Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...nd beautiful is the reception. This can gives an amazing first impression about the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, so, i mean, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5243902439 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33872708788 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8464928626 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187782053545 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663979266856 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514123767372 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870348653819 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373558472131 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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