Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
A large number of criminals who serves their first prison sentence, leave only to re-offend. This is mainly because of the lack of rehabilitation and difficulty in finding regular employment once released. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with criminals who re-offend.
The primary reason for most first-time offenders committing crimes again, once they released from prison is due to lack of rehabilitation whilst in prison. In other words, offenders are not given a chance to retrain and learn new skills for their future or develop a deeper understanding of correct moral behaviour and instead mixed them with other criminals, which only strengthens their criminal intentions. Apart from this, repeat offending is also owing to the difficulty in finding employment once they released. As a result, many of them struggle financially which leads them back to crime.
There are two effective solutions to the problem of repeat offenders. One way to tackle this is to ensure that all criminals entering prison are given chance to retrain with useful skills which will hopefully ensure them a job offer after they served their sentence. By doing this it will help them reintegrate back into society and give them some mean of supporting themselves financially. Another method of dealing with criminals who re-offend is to have more supervision and checks in place when they back in society. This solution would hopefully prevent them from taking any chances and deter them from re-offending because they are being closely watched.
In conclusion, having training in prison and also close supervision when first offenders are released are effective in dealing with this issue. If governments implemented these solutions,crime figures would soon drop.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of criminals who serves their first prison...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , crime
... governments implemented these solutions,crime figures would soon drop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35815602837 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8098982889 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560283687943 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7425556849 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201223529283 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720936409449 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342888654988 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125223854582 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201253179677 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.