It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people.
Do you agree or disagree
It is thought that young people should get advice from their seniors rather than their peers.
In my opinion, I completely agree that young people should get involved with their seniors in any decision to make because seniors have vast knowledge and real life experience than juniors.
The main reason why young people should take advice from their parents or Grandparents because they have more life experience than younger people. Today they are successful because they faced many challenges and overcame those challenges by learning from their mistakes. Apart from this, they have an idea, how to deal with such problems. Another reason is that seniors have in-depth knowledge in any area. If younger people get advice from them, their advice will always help youngsters and their advice will always give positive results. Therefore, getting advice from seniors will always be fruitful for young people.
On the other hand, There are many drawbacks of getting advice from peers. Firstly, If younger people get advice from their peers, this advice may not be useful as compared to senior citizens because the level of thought of young people and peers remains the same.This advice might be not useful and put the younger in trouble. For instance, One of my friends got advice from his friend regarding selection of his career but he advised to choose the same career which he was supposed to do. While, when he asked the senior about his career, they suggested that he pursue engineering and today he is the successful engineer in his life.
In conclusion, Young people may get suggestions from their peers but right advice can only be given by senior people because they have vast knowledge and more experience of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04529616725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27006626338 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491289198606 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5180111252 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350376166292 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151532808117 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106136533639 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248015937829 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442409919307 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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