Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones.
How important is it to maintain old buildings?
Should history stand in the way of progress?
it is suggested that historical structures should not be renovated while they must be substituted by new buildings. However they are part of the history and must be secured because the cultural diversity can be depicted in the old buildings. history represents someones past and it promotes creativity, and art.
First of all, old places are actual representation of the country's heritage. our history is inextricably bounded up by the culture and ancient buildings. In order to promote cultural diversity it is impactful to not to ruin historical places for the sake of building new ones. Government should take a step to preserve ancient monuments so that new generation remain bounded up with their roots. Otherwise it will create a vacuum in which our offsprings will lose their identity and will not be familiar with their ancestors.
Secondly, the ancient structures enhance the beauty of a nation and promote tourism. As many tourists want to explore the world to see tourist attractions and if they will not notice differentiation in the cultures then they will lose their interest to visit those places. because they will not find anything different or enthusiastic.
history can not hold someone back in the way to prosperity and progress. Nonetheless, it allows the visitors to explore the cultures and maintain the true pieces of heritage. history can be beneficial by allowing people to promote the tourism that allows the inflow of wealth in the country and ultimately contribute to the progression. it will develop positive image of the nation and develop the international relationships. In this way, trust will be developed to invest money in the country. For example, technology, construction projects, oil and gas exploration, and industry sectors will be benefitted by promoting tourism. Dubai has been considered the best tourist attraction because of skyscrapers, luxury hotels, fun activities and entertainment.
To conclude, in my opinion culture and heritage are the true essence of a nation that can be exhibited by preserving ancient buildings. In order to promote the tourism and cultural diversity, it is highly appreciable to secure the old buildings that can lead to progression and prosperity in a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28770949721 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03695007524 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508379888268 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1458034479 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.65 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208778159711 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633896018834 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047439482958 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120044316832 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517900774072 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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