Many parents believe that when their children read book for entertainment they are just wasting their time and that they should read only serious educational books What is your opinion about this

Essay topics:

Many parents believe that when their children read book for entertainment, they are just wasting their time, and that they should read only serious, educational books. What is your opinion about this?

Reading various kinds of literature is a good habit to develop amongst children specially when started at a young age. However, parents can be very particular and selective with the materials their children read. While many parents prefer their children to read only academic books, I believe that kids should have choices for leisurely reading as well.

To make reading less boring for children, there should be a good balance between educational and entertainment materials so that they will become wide readers. Many parents fear that their children might get addicted to comics and magazines, however, I believe that this could be avoided through adequate supervision and proper guidance. For instance, parents could buy their kids leisurely materials that have themes centered on good values formation and creativity.

Undoubtedly, reading books regardless of genre is a good mental exercise and has been found to bring positive benefits for children. It can both help develop creative imagination and improve language skills. As a matter of fact, children’s fiction such as Harry Potter and Lord Of The Rings series require a lot of imaginative reading and creative thinking. Further, reading can boost language learning most specially comprehension and vocabulary. It was found that children who regalarly reads are fast learners than those who do not read.

In conclusion, reading as a regular activity is a good way for children to spend their time as long as parents can ensure the quality and content of materials. In my opinion, parents should make it a point to make reading both educational and fun for kids so that they will develop a long term love for it.

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Average: 5.7 (4 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27572016461 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71146888982 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8236241738 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386988293431 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138906623932 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896730026343 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243673327633 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866531105024 0.056905535591 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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