In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin.
Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
In the concurrent world, it is observed that, in some countries, the companies dealing with skin products are making good amount of profit. In my discourse ahead, this essay will not only highlight plausible reasons behind this situation such as a blind run to follow fashion and growth in corporate sector, but also discuss negative effects on individual's health and society as a whole.
To commence with, the first and foremost cause for burgeoning usage of cosmetic products is people's preference to follow latest fashion trend. In other words, particularly youngsters invest huge amount of money to impress others. Another prime reason behind this development is to gain better career opportunities. This means to say that it can be seen that the impressive look is one of the criterias to select candidate during interviews in certain multi-national organizations. This has resulted in ever-increasing usage of creams to glow face. Take for an instance, an article published in Toronto Times in 2019 revealed that more than 30% customers preferred to use an anti aging cream from Pfizer cosmetics limited to get better career opportunities.
Despite the numerous benefits of skin creams, the negative effects of it should not be neglected. The dire consequences of using such products is side effect on skin. This is because the chemical components used to manufacture such products are dangerous for natural skin cells and have numerous detrimental effects. A good case in point is a report of Glenmak pharmaceutical limited in 2019 which stated that approximately 15% customer reported allergic reactions including red rashes and swelling of face after applying Glucederma lotion. Moreover, inevitable effect of it is unnecessary financial burden on the society. In other words, it is certainly true that most of ingredients used in dermatology products are quite costly which ultimately increases the price of products. A group of people have to spend a lot to purchase such products.
To conclude, it is an undeniable fact that cosmetic industries are making good profits from products used for whitening skins in some nations as people prefer to use it to follow fashion and grabing better opportunities which has negative impacts on individual's health and financial condition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...r, but also discuss negative effects on individuals health and society as a whole. To co...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'follow the latest'.
Suggestion: follow the latest
...metic products is peoples preference to follow latest fashion trend. In other words, particul...
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Line 5, column 666, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the ingredients') or simply say ''most ingredients''.
Suggestion: most of the ingredients; most ingredients
... other words, it is certainly true that most of ingredients used in dermatology products are quite ...
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Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...rtunities which has negative impacts on individuals health and financial condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, moreover, so, well, as to, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32782369146 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95394402042 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584022038567 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5275663055 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.875 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2917207448 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863262680282 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730147893622 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176922847678 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518927999807 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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