In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin.
Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
In the current scenario, by looking towards the latest market analysis of Asian countries, it is believed by a vast section of society that
the companies dealing with skin products used for glowing face are making good amount of profit. In my discourse ahead, this
essay will not only outline plausible reasons behind this trend such as a blind run to follow fashion and growth in corporate sector, but also
discuss negative effects on individual's health and society as a whole.
To commence with, the first and foremost cause of using too much cosmetic products is people's preference to follow latest fashion trend. This means to say that instead of living comfortable life, majority of mass try to look better than original look to impress others. Another prime reason behind this development is the incredible growth at workplace. It can be seen that the impressive look is one of the criterias to select candidate during interviews in certain multi-national organizations. This has resulted in ever-increasing usage of creams to glow face. Take for an instance, an article published in Toronto Times in 2019 on market growth revealed that more than 30% customers preferred to use an anti aging cream from Pfizer cosmetics limited to get better career opportunities.
However, despite the fact that usage of skin cream glows skin color, the negative effects should not be neglected. The main dire consequences of using such products is side effects on skin. This is because the chemical components used to manufacture such products are dangerous for natural skin cells and have numerous detrimental effects. A good case in point is as per report published by the department of medicine, Cambridge university in 2018 more than 15% customer reported adverse effects including red rashes and swelling of face after applying Glucederma lotion from Glenmark pharmaceuticals limited. Moreover, another inevitable effect of it is unnecessary financial burden on the society. In other words, it is certainly true that most of ingredients used in dermatology products are quite costly which ultimately results in high price of products. A group of people have to spend a lot to purchase such products.
To conclude, it is an undeniable fact that cosmetic industries are making good profits from products used for whitening skins in some nations. As mentioned above, people prefer to use it to follow fashion and to grab better opportunities which has negative impacts on individual's health and financial condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, as to, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24752475248 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8351386173 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581683168317 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8560722059 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.705882353 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295083350592 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880410409561 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711725948689 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138547826262 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640538116961 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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