Many people say that the life of people who live in the large cities is not comfortable.
What are the reasons behind this? What could be the solution
Although the standard of life is high in metro cities owing to easy availability of contemporary facilities, it is believed by a vast section of the society that
people living in urban areas feel uncomfortable. In my discourse ahead, I will not only outline the key reasons behind this situation but also propose plausible solution to tackle it.
To commence with, the traffic congestion is one of the prime reasons why life of citizens of developed cities is uncertain. This is because that
most of people prefer personal vehicles for commuting which has increased traffic jams on the road. Ultimately, the level of air and noise pollution have risen which has deteriorated health of locals. Take for an instance, as per article published in the Times of India in 2018 more than 40% people of metro cities in India felt uncomfortable because of heavy traffic on the road during peak hours. Furthermore, another main reason is mental stress to earn more money in big cities. This means to say that owing to high standard of living, people do not rely on single income source which ultimately put mental and physical strain on individuals which negatively affects their health.
In order to tackle this issue, both community and government should join hands. The transport facilities should be upgraded with more frequency, comfortable seating by the respective department of authority. This would have positive effect by diverting preference to public transportation from private mode of it. This would certainly reduce level of traffic and solve issues related to it. For example, the Canadian government has increased frequency of metro train in the Greater Toronto Area which has resulted positive as the commuters preferred comfortable public transportation. Apart from this, an individual should understand real meaning of life and happiness instead of only running blindly to strengthen financial position. In other words, quality time should be spend by an individual with family which undoubtedly would relax from monotonous schedule.
In conclusion, while living in big cities has copious advantages, people do not feel comfortable to live there because of heavy traffic and mental stress to earn money. This could be solved by increasing public transportation facility by government and understanding of meaning of life by society rather than live materialistic lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33862433862 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8816215741 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566137566138 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9713028889 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.705882353 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245432514319 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718465421153 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472871275794 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133511180552 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592811508433 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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