Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future.
Discuss the both views and give your opinion.
It is an undeniable fact that choosing of the right career path decides the journey of life. Although it is thought by a vast section of the society that the youngsters should be free to opt their career as per their own interest, others oppose and hold the view that they should think pragmatically about their future. In my discourse ahead, this essay will discuss both arguments of the topic and state reasons for my agreement with the latter view.
On the one hand, a certain school of thought thinks that the young generation should be free to decide their career. This is because of that if they choose stream of their interest, it increases probability to get success. Moreover, most people work with dedication, devotion and determination in their interesting field irrespective of various barriers. For an example, the great cricketer Sachin Tendulkar opted his career to be an Indian cricketer when he was teenager, and his interest motivated him to give his best to become famous personality.
On the other hand, the opponents of the above view argue that they should think practically about future perspectives while choosing a career. This may be due to the fact that in today's era of the cut-throat competition, it is very crucial to choose a line of education and experience which makes it possible to have copious opportunities ahead. This means to say that if person decides career based on the market situation, it would augment the chances of having successful professional life which makes it possible to earn good amount of money to satisfy the needs of life. For an instance, as per an article published in the Economic Times in July 2019, top 25 successful businessmen of the globe decided their career realistically in the formative years of life which make them enable to build bright future.
In conclusion, while there evidently are those in the society having an opinion for the young individuals to choose any career of their interest, I, however, agree with others who think that more realistic thinking about future while choosing a career as it secures safe and bright future and makes it possible to earn money to enjoy materialistic lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to stream'
Suggestion: to stream
... This is because of that if they choose stream of their interest, it increases probabi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9591280654 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70684550712 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534059945504 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8904714852 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.666666667 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5833333333 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40534181958 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146596599545 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133042927117 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254734567014 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590448466376 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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