Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Undoubtedly, media is the powerful source of infomation and cater the thirst of the viewers by providing updated details. However, majority of denizens vocalize that extensive coverage of well-known personalities inflict downward effects on juveniles. Therefore, this essay asserts that the emerging trend is accountable for provoking children to live a extravagant lifestyle and also indulging them in undesirable acts.
Since, television celebrities are idolized by people everywhere therefore they have to maintain a glamorous life in society which demands lavishly spending behaviour. Consequently, followers imitate their styling and squander their hard earned financial resources irrationally even for those materialistic items that are of no need. Moreover, some individuals get trapped in debts while following these unrealistic expectations and ruin their upcoming morrow. To exemplify, the hollywood renowned face Kim Kadarshian who is famous for transforming body through exorbitant plastic surgeries now promoting medical agencies and influencing young minds to opt such operations.
Even though superstars entertain populace by demonstarating their profund acting skills but their unacceptable actions adversly impacts the psychology of youngsters. In other words, majority of actors endorse some unhealthy products for the sake of money which instigate the young generation to consume such harzidous products rather than setting an example to abandon. It would be biased to overlook the data published by World Health Organisation stating that advertisement of alchol by some famous personalities escalating the consumption bar and also increasing the demand for it considering it as a style statement.
To conclude, this phenomenon is exaggerating briskly and in order to curb this hassle paresnts should restrict their offsprings from watching such channels or can limit the time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00366300366 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11085856254 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.725274725275 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4039817565 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0528350785186 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0198927850175 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264593998272 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0312049781374 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246913783338 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.82 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.88 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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