Many people believe that they should spend their money to enjoy life at present. Others, however, think that they should save it for the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the past, one of the parents, usually mother, stay at home for looking after their children. However, in this hectic world, living cost is drastically increasing and that necessitates both parents to work hard to earn their daily living. Moreover, due to career oriented lifestyle, parents are concentrating more on on their career and continue their jobs even if they have children. Grandparents are the best choice or perhaps the only choice for such parents, although there are some disadvantages but those are ignorable if we look at the advantages. In this essay I will elaborate my opinion in more detail.
Obviously, grandparents are the trustworthy caretakers of their grandchildren. Parents can leave their children with them and work with peace of mind. They will feed them and take care of them same or more than they care their own children. In addition to that, parents can leave children at their home, needlessly to bring them to any daycare centres. Furthermore, it saves 20 percentage of family income as additional babysitting or day-care centre cost is saved. In the case of any minor ailments, grandchildren are cared well by grandparents. Nowadays, people used to live isolated life and due to this old age people are feeling lonely and they don't have anyone with them to share their happiness and sorrow but with this arrangement, we can overcome this situation and it's a win-win situation for parents and grandparents.
Consistently, grandparents have enormous experiences in upbringing their own children and they are successful parents. That is why they can up-bring their grandchildren as well. They are better decision makers in many cases and this quality make them ideal to be attached to their grandchildren. Researchers indicate that children brought up with the family members learn more values and morality than those who spend their day time in day-care centre. Grandparents take special care of their grandchildren and spend the whole day with them and that do not let the children miss their parents as they would have with a babysitter.
Contradictory, there are some demerits of this trend also. First of all, children raised by the grandparents usually have weaker bonding with their parents. Moreover, the grandparents are in older age and this is the time to rest and relax. In many cases, it is hard for them to take care of children. In addition generation gap is something that will affect many areas of the development of children.
To conclude, it is undeniable fact that nowadays both parents needs to work to support their family and for the better standard of living so the trend of upbringing of children by their grandparents are welcomed and beneficial, this will strengthen the family bonding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09713024283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86497819095 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470198675497 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3506449402 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.391304348 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6956521739 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17771606044 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588688741517 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389635965122 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107824331707 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402196234423 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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