Many people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.
Accommodation type, a controversial decision for all people around the world, is an area of concern. It s believed that rental homes are way better than owning it. This essay will discuss firstly, the advantages of taking rental accommodations, and secondly, outline some disadvantages of this, following by a reasoned conclusion.
People choice of taking rental homes comes based on their needs and work wise, and they support their decision with several advantages as outcomes of it. When people commit with only a leased accommodation, it secures their free choice to work in any place. For example, due to current market fluctuation, many job contracts are expired; therefore, people change their residency to another place where they can find a suitable job. The rent contract can be terminated with very low damages to the renter or the owner with giving a proper notification period.
On contrary, some people claim that renting a house or an apartment has hectic consequences, and it is an additional burden to people stressful life. Rent fees are not controlled and not fixed in several countries, as it depends on the local marked demands. In addition, extra charges would be applied by the owners whenever tenants want to leave, if damages had been occurred. For instance, extortionate rental charges are measured in Qatar due to the availability of long-term potential projects, because of the World Cup which will be take place in 2022.
To sum up, it is preferable to choose the lease decision to be free in changing the accommodation whenever the situation needs, but we can not deny its drawbacks in some circumstances. Government should regulate the annual increase in rental fees by putting laws and strict regulation on the owners.
Comments
Government should regulate
Government should regulate the annual increase in rental fees by putting laws and strict regulation on the owners.
This idea is not necessary. Isn't it?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'homes'' or 'home's'?
Suggestion: homes'; home's
...sion. People choice of taking rental homes comes based on their needs and work wis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14634146341 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89758075187 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4869756923 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141449125636 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448602017311 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366803725288 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748072815871 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291771173415 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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