At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Unbalanced population, a widely accepted as an alarm for any nation, is a heated-up subject. Recently, the ratio between youngsters and old generation people are relatively high, and it creates a concern for some nations. I partially agree that it may be an advantage to some extent, but the disadvantage is measured on other aspects. This essay will discuss, firstly, its effect on Country`s development as one advantage of this, and outlining the impact on tradition of the country, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, several countries measured that there is a high rate in its youth comparing to the elder inhabitants, and this trend effects directly on its development and economy with positive outcomes. When the country aims to make an expansion in its local industries, they need young manpower to be the core of this revolution. Youth ambitions and fresh power are being utilized in several field by government to boost their local fabrication and invade international markets. For instance, several economies reached their peak due to their huge manpower of young people who work continuously to achieve their own target, where in China and its massive exporting globally.
On the contrary, the low rate in population of elders may cause a detrimental result into nation`s tradition and customs. Nowadays, youth are more committed to their future, and rushing after their future perspectives. Although, new generation are right to cope the world development in some areas, elders maintain the balance of their roots, without basics the tradition of nation may be lost. For example, some countries suffer from the unbalanced rate in their architectures, as its buildings do not reflect any theme of their original arts, where in United Arab Emirates.
To sum up, it is undeniable that the rise in youth population is advantageous, but the drawbacks cannot be neglected. It is both responsibilities either individuals or government to avid the disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, so, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33753943218 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0768921128 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593059936909 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.857733714 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128279230468 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432062085867 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387966821014 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072484582976 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374806774444 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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