Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
Pets breeding, a common interest in western countries, should be given the foremost consideration and attention. Some people argue that keeping pets at home is beneficial to kid’s personality while the opponents reject this notion, believing that sometimes pets are a danger to children either their health or safety. I partially agree with owning a pet, but with some consideration and control. This essay will discuss both, firstly, the benefits of pets at home, and secondly, the detrimental effects might occur to children from them, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Having pets inside houses is widely accepted idea by most of parents in some countries where in Europe or North America. Parents decide to have special breeds of animals in the houses, which are considered as omnivore like dogs and cats, and let their children learn how to treat the animals over their early ages. This way of life instrument children personality and behavior. For instance, a survey is undertaken by a prestigious institution reveals that 95 % of the children who own animals at home have an balanced personality.
However, owning such animals at home might have an invisible danger on the children while being alone or having a direct contact with them. The animal reaction is usually not expected, and it is not recommended to left it with kids without monitoring from their parents. For example, dog is a loyal animal as known, but it is a danger for tots who may get bitten. In addition to some viruses can be transferred from animals to children because of close contacts. For example, several cases are reported in United States that children get sometimes unknown viruses from their pets at home.
To sum up, there are several benefits from keeping pets at home with children, but it is not deniable that a full monitoring of parents should be taken place to avoid its drawbacks. I would recommend that regular checks on pets are mandatory to save our children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'get'.
Suggestion: sometimes get
...reported in United States that children get sometimes unknown viruses from their pets at home...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0243902439 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67183452956 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4263616815 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.866666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21451904673 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789637297918 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470092448959 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13808195066 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053610004204 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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