You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Fred,
I am writing to request some days off from work due to my current studies that I am enrolled at one of reputable universities in the City.
I have been enrolled into one important management course in the evening time over three weeks. When I finished its lectures last week, the university announced that the exam will be only scheduled to be on next week. Exam preparation is mandatory, and it will be by taking some days off for studying and some concentration on the subject. I submitted my leave application on portal; therefore, I would request that you approve it accordingly.
My colleague who is in the same department will follow up all my tasks during my leave; however, once finishing my exam, I will organize my schedule to work two shifts to complete any pending issues. Some tasks need only a documentation work, so I will be able to complete it from home after the due hours. This is will boost the performance of work next day.
Current course is a diploma in Project Management. It is advanced studies from a reputable university, and it will improve my qualification that will help our company at any forthcoming tendering. I would be very grateful if you accepted these days off.
Yours Sincerely,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81105990783 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84330676902 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599078341014 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4844620013 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245028721933 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875582710186 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551270835592 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142805066137 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032185412442 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.