The shifting of people from one area to another in search of food and shelter is termed as migration. Although it has been a trend from long past, more and more individuals are now started moving from rural to urban sectors. This essay will discuss its negative impacts and put forward several solutions for this issue.
Two main problems are linked with this transference. The first is the increase in slum society in cities; being uneducated, they are responsible for inclination in unhygienic conditions, pollution, et cetera, of that specific town. For instance, in my country, India, most of the areas accommodated by illiterates or slums are found to be more polluted and their living conditions are unsanitary. The second factor, linked to the first, is the growth in crime rate in towns because Being uneducated, poor people are generally unable to earn their livelihood in cities, as a result they are intended to commit crime in order make their both ends meet. It can be commonly observed that most of the offences are carried out by slums. Thus, this migration carries a lot of problem along with it that are unfavorable for city-residents.
However, tackling this issue involves development of industries which needs less educated employees in order to provide employment to the villagers since they are directed towards towns in search of job opportunities to fulfill their survival needs. In addition, government should arrange proper facilities of transportation, sanitation, electricity in the villages so that rural folks do not find it to be difficult to live in countryside. That is why, some solutions are needed to be taken by government authorities in order to balance the natural environment as well as reduce the offence rate.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the problems caused by the process of relocation and examined some of the steps that can be helpful in solving this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 760, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
... by slums. Thus, this migration carries a lot of problem along with it that are unfavorable for ...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the process of relocation and examined some of the steps that can be helpful in solving th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09872611465 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88362914596 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6990479938 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278971066927 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888370574301 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495791332016 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163068646639 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579505393795 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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