Many people say that companies should give importance to their employees, whereas others say that they should give importance to customers.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some people argue that it is important for companies to pay close attention to their workers, others say it is an essential to hold value for the clients. I agree with the latter because of existing cut-throat competition on the markets which makes it difficult to turn a profit.
On the one hand, supporters of the notion that the staff members are more important assert that the benefits accruing from them are by no means negligible. To begin with, since no company can go forward without the presence of their members of staff. That is to say, it is believed that it is they who do most of the work in business. For instance, should the business owners could deal with the different parts of the job, why would they hire them in the first place? Moreover, it is deemed to be unethical not to appreciate the employees’ rights. In addition, the more you value your staff, the more commitment they become to the job. This in turn has a far-reaching positive impact on their performance, affecting manifold aspects of the company.
On the other hand, others put forward to the argument that customers are of much more value. The most compelling reason justifying their assertation is that making a profit through sell figures of your service and merchandise happens only when the clients or the buyers feel they are valued. In other words, whenever the prospective customers know that they are respected and appreciated for making purchases, they urge to make purchases again. More specifically, if your company provides great opportunities for its loyal shoppers, they will not think twice about purchasing from your opponents. A good illustration of this is the quality brands like Apple and Nike, two fantastic International brands, in which they have been focusing on their buyers’ satisfaction in recent years and their outcome is self-explanatory.
In conclusion, despite the fact that both the workers and the buyers of each business are worth to be preserved and given importance, I would concede that the value of customers outweighs the importance of the staff.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...eciated for making purchases, they urge to make purchases again. More specifically, if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97994269341 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79292767327 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573065902579 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4669057861 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219434336456 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653880002926 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038148031311 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121453670622 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222895373471 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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