Many people these days have computer, laptops, and telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

Essay topics:

Many people these days have computer, laptops, and telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

The technology is becoming cheaper and convenient every day. It is argued by a significant number of individuals that a lot of people do carry electronic gadgets like laptop, telephones at their home for work purpose. In my opinion, duties done back at home have many advantages for the organization as well as for the worker.

To begin with, work from home has many benefits to the employer in terms of financial goals. Employees sitting at home for work can save money for their organization in various ways. For instance, the travelling cost from home to office and back will not be applicable in employer budget because employees will not come to the office daily. Secondly, the huge expenditure of office assets like an office building, furniture and stationery will be directly eliminated because these special things are not required anymore as a separate entity.

Similarly, work from home has many profits for employees as well in terms of supporting a family. A person who opts to work at home can give his family more time and supports family members whenever they need by helping them in various activities during their breaks from work. For instance, dropping children to schools and bring material from the supermarket. All these small activities give a sense of satisfaction to all family members including employee, as a result, they can maintain a balance between personal and professional life easily.

In conclusion, jobs carried at home rather than at outdoor office results numerous benefits to employees and their bosses. In future, it is believed that technology will completely change this trend of the outdoor office into indoor home work stations.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71520725051 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6661735672 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415535497503 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150021028309 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907374583371 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25002969052 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728572893657 0.056905535591 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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