Many people think that dangerous sport should be banned. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Undoubtedly, more and more people are inclining towards dangerous sports and it is always been in arguments whether these adventurous games should be prohibited or not. Though many critics hold an opinion that extreme sports must not be played, yet I assert that playing such games is beneficial to the player due to the following reasons.
The primary benefit of playing these sports is that the player becomes physically and mentally strong. Take an example of a mountain hiker, trekking a mountain boosts his physical stamina and makes him able to tackle the risks. The same goes with the Scooba divers and skydivers, they can fight with their phobias. Therefore, these sports are vital for uplifting the body and brain of the player.
Yet another reason for not supporting the idea of banning extreme sports is the career opportunities associated with it. Thrilling sports are gaining official recognition from the government. By this I mean, there are a lot of work opportunities being created such as becoming a guide, coach, and so on. As a result, it will help to boost the national economy, and many will get a livelihood. Additionally, a player has the option to earn a name and fame by creating a world record in his game.
In contrast, there are some people who believe that these activities should be prohibited because of the fatal nature of these games. They believe that it is foolish to put life at risk in the name of fun. Every year, many people get injured because of these sports and a few get heart attacks too.
In conclusion, some critics hold a perspective that considers the risky nature of the adventurous sport, it should be banned however I still assert that instead of banning, these sports should be played with the utmost safety and precautions because it provides name, fame, and wealth the player.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, i mean, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90415335463 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58529435452 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555910543131 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4410998769 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252963819649 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752473266364 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603997272453 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143916187642 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490187310972 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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