These day's more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this ?
Do you think it is a positive or a negatives development ?
In this modern society, there is a tendency that fathers only spend time at home taking care of children while their wives become the bread winner for a whole family. As I considered, this trend possesses more benefits than disadvantages. In this essay, some reasons and discussions about the advantages would be given.
Firstly, there are several reasons explain for the change of traditional role of breadwinner father and stay-at-home mother in society. While supporting gender-equality in society becomes more popular, more women are encouraged to join the workforce by government policies such as maternity leaves, shorter working hours. Therefore the fact that males stay at home and take care of their family should be respected and not be judged. Secondly, both men and women are deserved to choose a future career according to their abilities and experiences. Admittedly, many females are considered as possessing more qualifications and opportunities to access higher positions and earn decent salaries. Hence, the father should stay at home and support children’s bringing if the mother’s income is adequate for living expenditure.
In my personal view, the father’s contribution to the family has similar effectiveness as the mother’s role. First of all, males also have responsibility and ability in bringing up their children and taking care of their family. This is obviously beneficial when fathers not only support their wives in housework, but they can also be close with their children and deal with problems that are too strenuous for women. Secondly, males give more freedom to children's development and nurture their ability as the most comfortable and natural approach which can help children become more confident in social skills. For example, in many Asian countries, mothers tend to force their children to attend academic classes while fathers encourage their children to join a sports club or play musical instruments.
Taking everything into consideration, the tendency that males have the main role at home should not be an embarrassment because it not only benefits the family but also contributes to social development.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43916913947 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94112139083 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569732937685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2486228726 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399366965132 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132319131453 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681513578412 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23635149757 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899881557196 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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