These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is commonly observed that almost all couples are working professional nowadays. Women are also winning bread and butter and hence many fathers are taking ownership to take care of their offspring. There could be myriads of the reason behind this. Although some people say that this is a negative trend, I assert that it is purely a positive development.
To commence with, there are many key factors involved in this phenomenon. Primarily, women appear to feel the need of becoming self-dependent. By this, I mean that they do not want to rely on their partners for any financial expenditure. Secondarily, gone are days when there everything was inexpensive. Nowadays, inflation is at its peak, and therefore both the couple work day and night to fulfill the needs of their children and to attain a position in society. To illustrate, these days, a child needs everything ranging from top rank school to the latest gadgets and these demands cannot be catered by a single breadwinner in most middle-class families. Moreover, women in this falsehood have become ambitious and are not at all ready to compromise with their careers just for the sake of family.
In many big cities, couples are migrated from small provinces and their elders are still living in their villages. While women are out of their homes at their jobs, then it became the responsibility of the fathers to take care of their broods. Men are becoming supportive nowadays as they are also being benefitted if their wives are working which is acceptable because, in my opinion, if the home or the relation belongs to both then the responsibilities must be mutual. Gone are the days when women were seen in the four walls of the home, now they are also supporting their husbands in tough times which is the true meaning of any relationship.
To conclude, women earning money is the need of the current era because of the increasing inflation and women being ambitious of careers. They are being supportive by their husbands and therefore it becomes the duty of the fathers to nurture the kids while their wives are away which is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, therefore, while, i mean, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 13.1623246493 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91135734072 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73056858331 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540166204986 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5508330619 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.294117647 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317761859624 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097149385803 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690726558581 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189558980946 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414059040053 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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