These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is commonly observed that almost all couples are working professional nowadays. Women are also winning bread and butter and hence many fathers are taking ownership to take care of their offspring. There could be myriads of the reason behind this. Although some people say that this is a negative trend, I assert that it is purely a positive development.
To commence with, there are many key factors involved in this phenomenon. Primarily, women appear to feel the need of becoming self-dependent. By this, I mean that women do not want to rely on their partners for any financial expenditure. Secondarily, gone are days when everything was inexpensive. Nowadays, inflation is at its peak, and therefore both the couple choose to work to fulfill the needs of their children and to attain a position in society. To illustrate, these days, a child needs everything ranging from admission in top rank school to the latest gadgets and these demands cannot be met by a single breadwinner in most middle-class families. Moreover, women in this falsehood have become ambitious and are not at all ready to compromise with their careers just for the sake of family.
In many big cities, couples are migrated from small provinces and their elders are still living in the villages. While women are out of their homes at jobs, then it becomes the responsibility of the fathers to take care of their broods. Men are becoming supportive nowadays as they are also being benefitted if their wives are working which is acceptable because, in my opinion, if the home or the relation belongs to both then the responsibilities must be mutual. Gone are the days when women were seen in the four walls of the home, now women are also supporting their husbands in tough times which is the true meaning of any relationship.
To conclude, women earning money is the need of the current era because of the increasing inflation and women being ambitious of careers. They are being supportive by husbands and therefore fathers help to nurture the kids while their wives are away which is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, therefore, while, i mean, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 13.1623246493 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92655367232 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75941133593 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4708023982 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.588235294 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301671195859 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930782909063 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684562031705 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179723316061 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452993952828 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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