Many people think that money is the best gift to give to a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion including relevant examples.
It has been a debatable issue from the last many decades about the present to adolescents. One section of masses consider cash as a best gift whilst others do not believe in cash. This essay will discuss both views of the notion in detail and put forward opinion in subsequent paragraphs.
Let us begin by looking at the advantages of money as a present. The* First and foremost merit of getting money as a gift is that it can build-up morale and boost confidence in children. Teenagers are encouraged to do much better in the near future because they would get more money. So, they try to do their best in order to get rewards from their elders. To illustrate, a study conducted by The Times of India, reveals that adolescents who get money as a reward do good in life.
Turning to the other side of the argument that if kids get money as a present they can be involved in bad activities. It is found that if adolescents have money then they can start drinking alcohol, smoking and even they can become drug addicts. Apart from that they get involved in unsociable activities and ruin their lives. A research conducted by the Indian government on behaviour of a child reveals that 70 % of wealthy kids or who get pocket money usually get involved in bad habits. This is a devastating situation and children are not able to do anything in future. Therefore, we should avoid giving hard cash to them.
To conclude, although giving currency as a premium for motivation is not a bad thing yet, in this case, we should take care of our kids so that they do not get involved in any bad activity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56401384083 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51912069668 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5150046537 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133537229066 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463644485214 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035138258042 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086320071834 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470920143113 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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