Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss
In this modern era, crimes increased by many folds. Nowadays, we have seen it everywhere like on television, newspaper or in the media. Some people believe that prison is the best punishment for criminals. However, others believe that there is a myriad of ways by which we can punish criminals. I opine that we should punish criminals but according to their seriousness of crime which I will explain with examples in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, life in prison is far too comfortable for prisoners because they can enjoy in prison. For example, In India, Tihar Jail is quite popular because all luxury articles like television, mobile phone, and other facility are available inside the prison. This is the reason I do not agree that every criminal should be sent to prison.
Another reason is that a large number of prisoners are not actually a danger to society. Shoplifters and small thieves are the biggest examples of this. However, they send to the same prison where big criminals live. I believe that prisons should be made according to crime and we should separate the prisoners according to their seriousness of crime.
On the other hand, there is an argument that prison can help prisoners in rehabilitating. As a result, they will never re-offend when they are released and live a better life.
By way of a conclusion, it is a common belief that prison is the best way to punish criminals. I believe that it is not good to send every offender directly into prison. We should take decisions according to the seriousness of crime because there are many other ways to punish criminals instead of prison.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... to prison. Another reason is that a large number of prisoners are not actually a danger to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, for example, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91696750903 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64713268401 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501805054152 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1271813953 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1176470588 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343334625514 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124169675331 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140674216401 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197640114543 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781914076062 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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