Many people in today's society enjoy watching movies or TV programs about crime. What makes them so appealing to people? What is the impact of this on individuals and the society?
These days it is commonly seen that a huge number of masses are enjoying seeing shoes, which promote violence and crime. There are many reasons behind it and this is a serious matter of concern. As it is not only affecting people but also have served consequences on the society, which I will discuss in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, the violent shows are mainly seen by those who are depressed of some necessities. In other words, there are thousands of people who do not have sufficient money or those below poverty line. So these individuals find an instant solution to solve their problems by watching movies focusing on robbery, bar gallery and vandalism. Another reason for popularity of these movies is because of their whole story revolves around on taking revenge and their exact execution. As a consequence, many individuals compare their situation to the movie and walk on the footsteps of movies.
Undoubtedly, shoes that encourage criminally have vast effect on the person and as well as on the whole society around them. This is because crime is always compared with an addiction, and a famous proverb says ”once a criminal is always a criminal”. When a person develops a practice of committing a crime, then he not only damages himself but also to the people living nearby. Thus, it creates a fearful and unsafe environment for living.
In conclusion, indeed, TV shows promoting crime bear shows encourage people to commit wrongdoing more often. Along with this, they also destroy their life as well as creating negative environment in the peaceful society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05283018868 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6663094575 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.1888922386 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198433106308 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583553144438 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349470553752 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107025098188 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00645700766172 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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