You drive to work, but have recently had a problem parking your car at the office.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
describe the problem with the parking
explain how this is affecting you
suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Mr John,
I am Shivani and I am writing in connection with the parking issue that is faced by me.
I would like to tell you that from the last six month I am parking my car in the area that was designated to me. Unfortunately, due to some family issues, I was on leave from the last two weeks. And now what I am hearing from the security is that there is no space available for my vehicle.
Due to this, I have been parking in front of our office for the last couple of days, but this no longer seems to be a good option. Like yesterday I found out that there are multiple scratches on the mirror and on several other areas of ca. It is extremely affecting my vehicle's condition.
It would be great, if you allow the parking in the company's VIP area, owing to the security provided to this place.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Shivani
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 212, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...from the last two weeks. And now what I am hearing from the security is that there is no s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32142857143 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34593294033 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0270480647 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177193748914 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680611552667 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503822470868 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885520741011 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025309549772 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.