In many places, new homes are needed, but only space available for building them in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there?
What is your opinion about this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the increase of world population, more and more permanent lodging facilities are required for these people. Due to the lack of available lands to construct houses in urban areas, there is an ongoing trend to build houses in most of the rural areas. Some parts of the community are against in constructing houses in lands in the countryside. They argue that protecting the serenity of the rural untouched areas are more important than building new houses in those locations, when it comes to the sustainability of the environment. In this essay, my opinion will be explained for the above statements while considering the benefits and drawbacks in both scenarios.
I firmly believe that each and every family of the community should deserve a permanent residence. With the extremely limited availability of lands in urban cities, people however try to realize the dream of owning a house by cleaning and deforesting some of the rural areas without paying attention to the environmental impacts of the deforestation in short and long terms.
Rather than building up houses in rural areas by destroying the serenity of the countryside without a limit, people can seek alternatives to construct their houses. In this scenario, the local governments should help the community to achieve this task and also it should impose some regulations to keep the harmful environmental impact of the proposed projects to the minimum level which leads to a long-term sustainability of the environment. Governments can promote gated communities in rural areas and also apartments or urban cities among the people as a potential and economical solution for constructing a house.
Rather than constructing houses individually in rural areas without assessing the environment impact, a gated community project can bring a lot of benefits to the community as well as it will minimally impact to the environment in a bad way , since the environmental impact of the project is assessed prior to set up the project by the government or any other authorized organizations.
Even though, some people find it difficult to live in an apartment in an urban city or to live in a gated community area in the countryside ,their personal difficulties and opinions should not outweigh the positive environmental impacts and long-term sustainability of the nature that would be gifted to the next generations.
In conclusion, I can state my opinion with the support of the above-mentioned points as follows. Although , a house is a basic need of every human being ,we should not try to build up our houses by destroying the nature of the countryside without a proper assessment. If we do so, our next generations would definetely have to suffer with the harsh environmental effects such as global warming, severe droughts , and lack of water to drink.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, in short, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 41.998997996 195% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2370.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 460.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09881995116 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480434782609 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.0 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2965429976 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14930240664 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573209431382 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363956914577 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780294846032 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621982977542 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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