In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their aging members.
Do you agree?
In many societies, elderly care done by others, rather than the family, is socially stigmatised and families are morally expected to look after their elderly. While many communities believe old age homes are pragmatically significant.This essay would argue why the idea that only children should care for their parents in old age is outdated and inherently flawed.
To commence with, many claim that parents should be looked after by their offsprings as a gesture of reciprocation for the love and affection their parents gave them, while they were young and dependent. Nonetheless, this superficial ideology is hardly practical nowadays, since families have the least amount of time left for their loved ones. As the elderly need attention and time both, children, today, are least likely to look after them.
Furthermore, plethora of cases worldwide suggest the plight of elderly at the hands of their own children. They are consciously neglected. To elaborate, they are refused the access to basic necessities like nutritional food and are tortured physically too. In a recent report, it was concluded that Indian pensioners living with their families suffered domestic violence at least twice.
Moreover, pensioners once earned and paid taxes to their governments, while they were young, so that they will be supported by them during their vulnerable times. Consequently, the pensioners qualify for a convenient and dignified life during their final years, constitutionally as well as fundamentally.
To conclude, governments cannot avoid the responsibility of their older generation by simply imposing their care on family. Old people deserve a respectful living on the basis of the contribution they made while they worked, not the disgrace and torture brought about by their loved ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y expected to look after their elderly. While many communities believe old age homes ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...age homes are pragmatically significant.This essay would argue why the idea that onl...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
...inherently flawed. To commence with, many claim that parents should be looked after by ...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...aborate, they are refused the access to basic necessities like nutritional food and are tortured ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, while, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47311827957 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93524535029 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0076647439 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233436719122 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781926005397 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513966981755 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128993933234 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590726090805 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.