Many working people get little to no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
A lot of individuals from the working class end up developing health issues as they do not workout during the work hours or personal time. In the following paragraphs I will explain the reason and the solution for this problem.
The main reason why a large number of working people choose not to take part in physical activity is the lack of energy and time. Nowadays, the work pressure has increased so much that the employers are under a lot of pressure to deliver the work before a deadline. As a result, people stay so busy with their work that they feel exhausted to work out and also do not find sufficient time for it. According to a research conducted by Toronto university it was found that 80% employed people did not have an exercise routine due to long work shifts.
The solution for this issue is a reduction in work hours which would encourage people to have more time to take care of themselves by working out. Also, people would feel less physically exhausted if they work for some reduced hours which would in turn help them to use more energy in exercise. In a survey done by Harvard university it was concluded that people work out more when they have shorter shifts as compared to when they have longer shifts.
To conclude, many employed people struggle with health disorders which are caused due to lack of exercise. It is the lack of sufficient time and physical energy that stops working people from engaging in physical activity. The solution for this is to lessen the amount of time people work so they can utilize it for exercising. I can say from my personal experience that I find it easier to exercise when I only work part time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...or this problem. The main reason why a large number of working people choose not to take part ...
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Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... it easier to exercise when I only work part time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60067114094 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40065200293 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476510067114 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.1063803136 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373917851373 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147355524988 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442304324949 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243666206607 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415786788685 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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