Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays in this competitive world everyone is running to get fit into this or to put their step ahed among all. This phenomenon to work extremely hard in the fear of to be left behind has changed people's way of living. This is causing several serious health issues which are being avoided by everyone. With the proper consideration of reason and its solution i would like to explicate my views in coming paragraph.
Firstly, to earn handsome salary and living a life of their dream, most of the individuals work beyond their health capacities. They are not aware of the problems they are putting themselves into for future prospective. Working ten to twelve hours a day is so tedious task that anyone can hardly get spare time to do something else, because their job consumes most of their time. Apart from time constrain the another reason for this lifestyle is sedentary jobs where a person has to seat whole day for work. For instance, jobs in bank or IT company entail employees to seat around whole day in front of computer. Furthermore, after a busy schedule and tiring day it becomes arduous for anyone to take out some time and perform any exercise. Additionally, work pressure also put a person in such situation where, they are not able to provide any attention to their health and the result they end up having so many problems related to health such as, obesity which is the main reason of this lifestyle.
Moreover, there are many solutions can be presented to resolve this issue. Government should impose a strict employment law related to working hours of employees, and all the employers whether it is government offices or private institution should apply these law. In addition to that, no employee should be allowed to work more than a defined time. As well as, companies should design their work place in such manner that there should be a proper space for walking. All the people who have seating jobs should be allowed to take out some time from their work for a little walk or to do any exercise to relax their muscle. However, companies provide all the facilities, this is the overall duty of a person to take care of their health.
To conclude my essay i would say that living a healthy life is depends upon a person, we should certainly take out at least half an hour from our busy time table to take care of our body. This practice can bring plethora of visible changes in any one's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, as to, at least, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66588785047 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42979308686 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7326325965 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.105263158 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334254888856 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978815843105 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682767912956 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176017790534 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089612288431 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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