many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem

Essay topics:

many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?

Exercise, which helps an individual to stay alive and kicking, is being ignored by a plethora of masses during not only their working days but also during their nonworking days as well, and have myriad repercussions on health due to the same.
At the outset, employed individuals often neglect workingout because they usually get mentally and physically exhausted by their jobs due to which they don't have any energy left to do some exercise. Doctors, for instance, spend most of the time running in different wards doing operations, checking and many more, which consume all of their mental and physical power and as a consequence prefers relaxing and rejuvenating themselves in lieu of working out and therefore has adverse effects on their health. That is why, due to the backbreaking day at work and hence dearth of energy, masses choose not to exercise.
On the other hand, are there any possibilities to ameliorate the same? Certainly, there are; First of all, by exercising in the morning one can add workout in his routine as during that time a person's mind is fresh and is physically relaxed and energetic. To cite an example, a survey conducted by the Hindu, one of the most authentic newspapers of India, elucidated that people who work out in the morning are less likely to skip their workout as compared to the others who devote evenings for their exercise. Apart from this, joining a gym can also be proved very useful as one can get incentive from other folks sweating there. Hence, by making such changes, one can inculcate the habit of working out.
To conclude, although both physical and mental exhaustion from work is responsible for skipping exercise for working masses, making workout first task of the day and by becoming a member of the gym can add workout in the schedules of employed individuals.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hausted by their jobs due to which they dont have any energy left to do some exercis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89032258065 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6364924828 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.868642157 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.6 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282929853647 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101351636791 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456225454904 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16605933414 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157271556408 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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