In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
Curfew, which is being imposed in various nations worldwide to cool some serious situations, is becoming common in this day and age due to various conflicts happening every other day. Due to this, regimes often restrict open roaming of adolescents without any accompanying adult, which I perceive is a positive approach. So, what can happen if this strictness is not implemented?
First of all, curfews are implemented to ameliorate the situation which will not be the case if teenagers were given freedom as they can act as a catalyst and worsen the situation mainly due to lack in cognizance as they can be swayed by anyone to do harm and illegal stuff. In America, for instance, a group of evil minders convinced the adolescents to set fire and destroy a public property when are not being accompanied by their progenitors or guardians. That is why, to maintain serenity during such situations, it is better to keep teenagers away.
What is more, it can also have detrimental effects on the mental health of young individuals as they can be jeopardised through the scenes like police, destruction and more. To cite an example, an article in The Hindu, one of the not only authentic but also popular newspapers of India, elucidated that teenagers are the ones who are adversely affected by some horrific scenes which remain engraved in their minds deteriorating their mental tranquility. Thus, for the well-being of teenagers it is imperative to keep them under guidance under such circumstances.
To conclude, although teens are the future of the world who should be involved in every activities, it can have repercussions on their mental peace and can also fuel the fire.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, well, for instance, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98220640569 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87743051836 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2056449277 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205173735741 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752278750763 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356546417715 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112987440632 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579270415823 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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