Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In your opinion, is this good or bad?
These days, the trend to clone behaviour of celebrities amongst youngsters is quite common and is seen to be gaining momentum. While some believe that this has negative impact on the young people, others argue against the notion. In my opinion, copying famous personality of sports and movies could be harmful for younger generation, and in this essay I will support my view with examples.
First and foremost, the most significant problem is that youth starts loosing their sense of self-awareness. It is because they are busy copying others, and in the process they become more materialistic. For instance, youth nowadays keeps track of what kind of apparels are being worn by famous people. As a consequence, they would demand their parents to buy them same pair of clothes. Ergo, leading to increased emotional and financial pressure on family.
Furthermore, young crowd can become arrogant and learn to misbehave in order to attain popularity. There are certain set of movie or sports stars who have gained limelight in eyes of public because of their rude and inappropriate behaviour. To illustrate, many schools have witnessed few kids getting into the habit of bullying others just to gain attention, are the ones who are influenced by watching interviews of celebrities.
In conclusion, imitating celebrities in movies and sports can has many downside to it and possess detrimental effects on the youth, such as lack of self-awareness and the fact that it could also develop within themselves the attitude of being more stubborn and egotistic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19841269841 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8509743818 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6471884942 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149852034555 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414972933463 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394547090064 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838526569596 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467410825768 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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