Many young people regularly change jobs over the years. What are the reasons for this?
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent times, youngsters prefer to switch jobs frequently as they want to explore new things or sometimes they get fed up with the same routine. However, this essay believes that job change brings more benefits to employees which outweigh the drawbacks of working at the same place for years.
On the one hand, I concede that gaining experience while working at the same organization for years can add many perks, incentives, and promising salary package. It could be argued that once you learned all the skills and tactics for that job, then it becomes monotonous for an individual to continue a career at the existing workplace. Therefore, a need arises to change the current company in order to achieve more success as well as promotion in a specific area.
However, although the upside of staying at current workplace is a real concern, some group of people advocates that job-switch should be done routinely, as it will boost cognitive ability of people and with the traveling, exploring new place people can experience various lifestyles of different traditions whereas doing job for same company for many years seems dull and uninteresting . To exemplify, nowadays youngster adore doing private jobs instead of the government, owing to in government jobs people get stuck in the same place for a long time, on the other hand in private jobs switching can be done multiple times.Moreover, it is clear that the reason responsible for the fluctuation of jobs is getting annoyed with the previous job and lack of opportunities.
To conclude, although I admit that staying in a current job is a wise decision, to learn distinct skills and improvement which people receive with more switching of jobs are invaluable. Therefore, I agree that the merits of replacing a job outweighs the disadvantages.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-02 | Hafsach2011 | 84 | view |
| 2019-11-01 | Ahmed Shehata | 73 | view |
| 2019-01-03 | rekharastogi | 67 | view |
| 2018-11-20 | JayinOZ | 73 | view |
| 2018-11-14 | NAVNEET BALI | 73 | view |
- Many criminals commit further crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest? 61
- Some people believe all the wild animals should protect while others think only some animal need to be saved Discuss both views and give your opinion 95
- Some people tell that to reduce traffic and pollution, the government should increase the tax on petrol (gasoline). Would advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- With deforestation urban development and illegal hunting many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction Do you think it is important to protect animals What measures can be ta 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... many years seems dull and uninteresting . To exemplify, nowadays youngster adore ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07272727273 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75641306039 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1522224552 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250225545857 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102577320869 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570570601765 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147167648565 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357002922282 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.