More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or remotely rather than going into an office each day Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages

Essay topics:

More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day.

Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, numerous corporations allow their workers to telecommute than ever before. Companies are able to provide such options easily, because of the significant technological improvement in networking. This essay will discuss about the positive and negative outcomes of this work from home culture.

Teamwork is vital to an organization’s success. People will be able to express their thoughts and ideas effectively with each other, when they meet face to face. Also, critical conflicts can be mitigated within minutes once team members meet in person. Whereas, communicating via emails and phone calls may take hours to resolve similar issues. Hence, some conservative managers prefer their employees to work from office premises.

On the other hand, Telecommute is an important technological solution for various key issues. Let us take a look at such issues. If a majority of the employees start working from home, then road congestion will drop which in turn will reduce the air pollution. Also, city population can be controlled to an extent. Furthermore, companies can hire talents across countries and allow their employees to work remotely. With this approach, Industries get to save big chunk of money in salaries as city workers are paid heavily compared to sub-urban and countryside due to the difference in cost of living.

In addition to that, employees will have much better work-life balance and which will improve the overall company’s productive. A recent study shows that, the employee's anxiety level reduced up to 40% when they work in relaxed environments such as a home office, coffee shops, etc.

To sum up, though there are some disadvantages involved in work from home option, advantages of this modern approach clearly outweighs the negative aspects. So, companies should encourage their employees to telecommute, if possible

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Average: 9.5 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, then, whereas, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46551724138 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95609771053 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648275862069 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8576361819 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278514571752 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784818980958 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595667334465 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153831315485 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356302107804 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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