More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport?
In recent times the number of people who prefer to drive their own car rather than use public transport has increased. It is needless to say this trend has significant effects on the ecosystem and adds to the long list of challenges that public and government face. In this essay, some of the reasons that cause this unfortunate problem and some possible ways of motivation the masses to use this public service will be comprehensively introduced.
While there is a cascade of the reason that might cause people to distant themselves from public transport, the first and perhaps the main reason for this trend is the age of public transport system. Many people stop this service because they claim the majority of vehicles such as buses and trains in service are out of date, noisy and dirty. Moreover, they are usually late and crowded. The last time I tried to use public transport, I had to wait almost half an hour for a bus to arrive. Consequently, I was late for an important interview.
When there is a problem, there are solutions, and The challenge at hand is not an exception. Firstly, the public transportation fleet should be renewed, therefore, the replacement of older vehicles is a step in the right direction. In addition, free transport on certain days especially weekends will encourage people to use the service. Last but not least, development of lines and covering more parts of the city offers a more permanent solution that makes the public transport more practical and convenient for the people.
To sum it up, although the decreasing rate of using public transport can be caused by many reasons, policies such as renewal of the transport fleet or further development of the infrastructure can be adapted to tackle this challenge.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91946308725 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77431351126 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.106950849 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449707725822 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137717129563 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946914764081 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2604722426 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448425494556 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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