More and more work is being carried out by machines in all areas of our lives. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Give reasons and example from your own knowledge.
Technology has been around for some time but, the pace at which it developed in recent times both startled and surprised people. Machines are emergence of technology which have both positive and negative impacts on human lives as it becomes an inevitable part in st century. Upcoming paragraphs here discussed both parameters.
Usability of machinery bring more comfort, convenience and ease at home as well as at work. Consumer products such as washing machine and microwave oven work automatically and do not require full-time attention once switched on as these products operates automatically. One can utilize this time to spend with beloved family or pursue hobby. In the same manner, automation in businesses lead to development of organization by a hike in mass production and reduces hardship among workers. Before fifty years, huge engineering works took decades to complete one assignment while , in today's time, even more complex structures have come into action in a short span of time by advances mechanism. Apart from that, with the help of machines quality, quantity and speed of work swell considerably.
The other side of coin, is that more and more equipment freak industries tend to keep human intervention far away as much possible which results into destruction in employment opportunities and would create chaos for developing nations having rapid growth in population. Moreover, reduction in physical labour makes people lethargic which is detrimental to their health. It also effects on aliveness, effectiveness and concentration ability of workers.
In conclusion, machinery is a double-edged sword which has immense benefits and drawbacks. As it makes work easy and smooth but,at the cost of health. One should adapt automation while keeping oneself disease-free.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46762589928 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97735357636 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697841726619 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0550026106 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127187496078 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035426216744 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340898939206 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632801269624 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439256407368 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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