YOU HAVE JUST MOVED TO CANADA AND ARE IN SEARCH OF A JOB. WRITE A LETTER TO THE LOCAL EMPLOYMENT AGENCY.
- DESCRIBE YOUR QUALIFICATION
- MENTION WHAT KIND OF JOB YOU WANT.
- EXPLAIN YOUR EXPECTATION.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to requesting your assistance with finding a job.
I have seven years of experience in the field of accounting as well as auditing company's finance. Since I finished my study in commerce, I have ample knowledge of business law working as a free lancer for the past year.
In past, I gained clear knowledge of managing portfolio and account for many companies have given me the extra edge in them. Hence, I would like to work as an accountant in the firm or as a teacher in some school or institution to help students grab opportunity in the field of business law. As this is my long time dream to guide them.
As I have just moved to Canada last week, I am looking for an opportunity to start my profession in this province with a fair and a decent job. However, it would be much appreciated to have 32 - 35 working hours a week with one day off.
I am looking forward to receive a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Billy Silly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: FREE_LANCER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'freelancer'?
Suggestion: freelancer
... knowledge of business law working as a free lancer for the past year. In past, I gain...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...s a free lancer for the past year. In past, I gained clear knowledge of managing p...
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Line 8, column 293, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...portunity in the field of business law. As this is my long time dream to guide the...
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Line 11, column 171, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciated having'.
Suggestion: appreciated having
...a decent job. However, it would be much appreciated to have 32 - 35 working hours a week with one d...
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Line 14, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...one day off. I am looking forward to receive a positive response. Yours faithfu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54748603352 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64575131106 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625698324022 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.881260726 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127658658866 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508596873255 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580850716465 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718713545192 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735906805988 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.