More and more work is being carried out by machines in all area of our lives. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Today, we can see that machines have taken place in almost every sphere of our life be it agriculture ,industry, service sector or health care and education system. This essay will discuss some obvious benefits of this change like better quality of products and services and possibility of need based production and on the other hand few drawbacks as well.
First of all the use of modern high-tech machines have considerably enhanced the quality of the products produced. These help to produce standard quality products with very less defects as compared to the traditional hand-made methods. For instance, introduction of high-technology production techniques like six sigma had been possible only because of the use of automatic machinery, wherein there are merely 3.6 defects per million parts being reported. Another major advantage is the reduction of process time by leaps and bounds. It is a fact that machines can work continuously with little or no human interventions and production can be increased hypothetically 'n' number of times just by installing more machines . Therefore, we would not have to wait for anything because it can be produced rapidly as per the requirements.
However, the biggest apprehension about the use of machines is that it leads to huge unemployment at all levels. These days machines can work continuously 24 hours by 7 days a week without break which is not possible for the human beings. So, it has led to people being thrown out of work due to usage of technology in every sphere of life be it in factories, in back office operations work or on the construction sites. Furthermore, too much reliability on machines has been detrimental for the survival of the traditional skills and creativity of the previous generations. We can see that traditional arts and crafts and other skills which totally depended on the imagination and creativity of human beings are dying out for example, the traditional architectural styled buildings and classical musical instruments made by hand.
In conclusions, it can be observed that there are plethora of advantages of using machines to the society and businesses at large but there are also irreversible negative effects like the huge redundancy and losing of traditional skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18032786885 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02431449804 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568306010929 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6252686903 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.428571429 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197669308833 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646068220211 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434499973011 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110870427344 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243612631693 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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