More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Child obesity is a serious threat in developed countries. Overweight problem among children is rapidly growing along with well-grown countries. Thus, wealthy countries are at a drastic risk. It is mostly because of unhealthy food lifestyle, it cause an early age disease. This essay will discuss the reason behind the problem and their effects with some evidence.
Food lifestyle is one of a major cause for children overweight problem. Not only food habit but also lack of outdoor games participation contribute for body oversizing for children. To cite an evidence, recent survey performed by Harvard University among various age group of children from Florida in the United States of America found that, indoor gaming interest outweighed outdoor gaming interest. In other words, the average of children playing PlayStation game spikes up than children playing American football. Undeniably, less body movement increases to put on more fat on their body.
Additionally, lack of diet control and unhealthy food or high calories food consumption gives an abnormal weight at young age. Thus, it leads to some health diseases such as thyroid, diabetic. Parents should monitor their kids food habits and also motivate them to participate in outdoor clubs such as Soccer, Hockey etc. Precisely, Government must ban some food products attracting youth such as Coke, Pepsi
In a summary, abnormal weight is problem among children is rapidly growing along with well-grown countries. Thus, wealthy countries are at a drastic risk. It is mostly because of unhealthy food lifestyle, it cause an early age disease. Government must ban some food products attracting youth leading to health issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42803030303 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66989033369 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6100661864 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2941176471 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206426614874 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727695868553 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662791264634 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131760870829 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792518328974 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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