More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, it has become a common as well as a serious issue in 1st world countries where children are suffering from obesity. There are many reasons behind such outcomes. It is often argued that pogressive nations are encouraging first food chains to increase the rate of gaining weight, while others believe that bad parenting is responsible for that. This essay agrees that parents are choosing short-cut paths to feed their children resulting in excessive weight. This article will discuss causes and effects of this problem.
It is noticeable that western countries are having majority percentage of weight increasing reports. Easily available street food containing high amount of transfat is increasing the country higher weight rate. This has become comfort food for lots of teenagers and kids. It is therefore agreed that this can be a cause of this problem. For example, USA, UK, South-east Asian countries are suffering from such physical issues.
In other hand, allowing children to consume street food is not a good sign of perfect parenting. Sometimes, parents choose easy path to feed them readymade food. As an effect of such growing issues, kids are not finding homemade foods interesting. Parents must be strict enough and able to provide alternative tasty self-cooked food. If the kids will have similar healthy choices, they will not choose un-hygienic food which assists in weight gaining. For instance, there are recipes available to cook restaurant-style food at home. There are mothers who follow the same.
Becoming overweight is a known problem for several first-growing republics. In India, mothers tend to copy the street food in their own kitchen adding more healthy substances which help kids to less consume the our-side food.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63116137933 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7911855618 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3157894737 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7368421053 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239682611883 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798259829764 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842960250389 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161659188786 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900807904536 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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